I love it! =]

haha i like this one. i wonder what your implying though ;)

Hey, this was really good! I'm not usually one for short poems, but this is one of the few that I can relate to, and leaves a lasting scar of familiarity. Amazing job.

this is an interesting one! =] more please =]

interesting

lovely but what's the 3 doing there?

hey go figure i can see this poem lovely

interesting words...wanna...haha...
anyway it's still so beautiful...

chapter 2 doesnt show up...fix it


this poem is wonderful interesting thoughts...

i like the idea of a drabble pieces series...not sure of the title though :P


i love this poem...it's written so beautifully...my gosh wonderful piece...