Reviews for But a Rose - FictionPress.com

Reviews For: But a Rose

blackoblivion13 2008-06-14 ch 3,	Poor Todd... Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
ally 2007-06-04 ch 3,	i just picked up this story and im really liking it i'll be looking forward for more :D
Phoenix II 2007-04-26 ch 3,	WOW I need to check up on this place more often... Jesus Goddamn...poor Todd. LOL, gotta love perceptive younger siblings though.
Fay D Flourite 2007-04-07 ch 3,	aww another great chapter and take it from me this stry is really going somewhere. i'm really enjoying it. Can i just say i like that you used the name Noah for Todd's lil bro as i LOVE that name and everyone tells me it's gross. I also like the way Todd is helpless when it comes to Brandon's smile as that's exactly how i feel when i see the guy i currently like (no questions please. lol) i can really understand how one smile can make him want to do something he didn't want to or couldn't do before. Well done A smile can be as helpful every day as the things you really need. Keep smiling. Fay Fay. X...X
Abstruse Blue 2007-04-07 ch 3,	Poor Todd, can't resist Brandon's natural charm, can he? haha. Well whatever anyone else thinks, you have my support on this one. I really likw it and look forward to more! So please continue.
Fay D Flourite 2007-04-05 ch 2,	hey. wow i really like this. i think the way you've started it is fantastic cos now i really wanna see what happens next well not see but you know what i mean. i love the way Todd likes his best friend but can't tell him cos of his girlfriend. poor Todd. anywho i also like that Claire is so nice cos it makes the whole story have a sort of 'how could you think of doing that Todd? She's so nice'. I think that is what makes me want to read on most because i want to see if Todd will do something. GO TODD! Smile always and drink in the moments that make your life worth while. Fay Fay. X
Phoenix II 2007-03-29 ch 1,	Dropping a review here, because I found my account :D and, because fp won't let me see ch. 1, but I saw them together before you split this up into prologue and first chap, so... Anyway, I love it, and will perhaps place up something of my own soon. Meh. Adieu!
Abstruse Blue 2007-03-29 ch 2,	Yeah, so I reviewed this the first time it was it up but since you re-posted 'tis gone now. oh wellz... But yeah, FP has been really screwed up lately. Like not showing new chappys for like a week or going back to displaying things how they were a few days ago then jumping back to actually updated stuff. It's crazy! Anywho, I love the start of this...like major! I'm really into it and its only prologue and first chapter. It flows well (despite not being proofread) and really has captured my attention immediately. So please, PLEASE continue this one as well!! Its so good and I can relate to the characters thus far. Crazy too but in an awesome way!
.ashes.rising. 2007-03-29 ch 2,	aye me, the drama of traingles... I really like the voice you're developing as Todd, and the relationship he has with Claire. Very nice, keep it up.

Return to Top