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IrishCarBomb
2008-03-12
ch 1,
Sad to think of how some people think theyre should actually be a "cure" for homosexuality. Loved how you wrote this by the way.
Omok
2008-02-27
ch 1,
if the world turned in to that, i'd probably kill my self; and seriously , I would. Its too dark to live in no more, there's no more happy or sunny days, I would have to be changed for who i am naturally...thats...just sick, truly sick, and they say homosexuals are sick?

anyhow, good story i guess =) it gave me an bran new idea to this world, something that i have never though of before.
SicksisterSam
2008-02-15
ch 1,
Wow...this is amazing! I've never read anything so moving!
Adenil
2008-02-10
ch 1,
I've read this multiple times, each time it seems better. I really like your writing style, and the subject matter. Keep up the amazing story work!
Like a love sick puppy
2008-02-10
ch 1,
I really liked this. Society does make people fell like they're freaks b/c if their sexuality orination (if it's not heterosexual). I would suggest continuing this but thats just me...
wecouldgoandget40s
2007-04-05
ch 1,
This, in my opinion, was super cool and seemed to me as pretty original. Your story actually got me mad for a moment: so many people are so homophobic that they're either in denial or try to change a person they know who's gay/lesbian. It's pretty natural, if you ask me. You know, being homosexual.

Very nice work. I liked it. Hope to read more of it.
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