Aw... It was really sweet... You really should do a 'years later' thing, that'd be great... I loved the format, it really flowed in the disjointed way I think you meant for it to - like glimpses caught at random intervals, funnily enough. I'm not too sure about 100 - did Jesse and Lanai get separated or something? ie The Parents divorced?
Yeah, I loved it.

Who is Jacob? In 69) white, you said she dragged Jacob to the mall. Don't you mean Jesse and I don't understand number one hundred. Who was he fighting? Did he and Lania get together? I'm confused.

wow, NICE story! Im adding to favorites! You should definitely do a sequel or a years later epilogue thingy where we see them in a really happy place in their lives.

It felt like you were writing out of order in some places sometimes, and it ended too abruptly, but otherwise, great story and Jesse and Lanai had GREAT chemistry.

that was so sweet.

I loved it.

=)

All I have to say is cute as hell. I love your story, it may not be written in a story format but I think its SUPAH KAWAII! Lol whatever I think your awesome. ;) Keep up the good work!

Its nice. So the story is about these 2 stepsiblisings that like each other? causeits kinda confusing