Reviews for Something mostly forgotten

Adenil 2008-03-17 ch 1,	Breeze should end with an 'e.' One thing, And the entire world gets into a rhythmic chaos; Has an awkward feel to it. Seems a bit off, to me. Favorite line: When angels fight the demons in the stars Wow, the visual is amazing
a silenced revolution 2007-03-29 ch 1,	Wow. Beauiful wording. Very interesting. I like this very much. Good work!
Ashelin 2007-03-29 ch 1,	This was really sad. I think "breez" was supposed to have an "e" at the end, but I don't care about spelling mistakes much. "Maybe that is why rain hides the tears/Supresses the shouts/And the entire world gets into a rhythmic chaos; Slattering rain" Those were my favorite lines. Great job, I really like this.