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| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-04-14 ch 1,  | abuseGoddamn, you write some of the best haiku I have ever seen. They're so VISUAL, and you have such a way with words, using only the most interesting ones to express yourself. That first haiku is so incredible just on its own, and then you manage to add even more depth and meaning with the tankas. Fantastic. Keep writing! :) |
| xx-cronopio-xx 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abuseNICE. The poem begins a little dubiously (with oft-used allusions to corsets and Victorian restrictions) but comes into its own in the second stanza (I like the ingenious connection made between the seven circlse of hell and the matryoshka doll). My imagination was also quite scintillated by the imagery of hearts and lungs transposing through skin without "armor" - an intriguing concept. Adieu, Kat. P.S. What exactly are the intended connotations of your penname? Is it that you would LIKE to (physically) kick Poe? Or that you feel you are "kicking" (outdoing) Poe with your own poetry? Do we have the same Poe in mind, even? *feels bewildered* |
| Basara 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abusewow... richly dark... nice... |
| Moondog Dozier 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseVery vivid and specific. I like how you've used active, descriptive words to make the reader understand and relate to the progression of the theme. Excellent work. |
| she smolders 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseThat's such a great analogy to use. Your descriptions are so amazingly vivid that I feel like I know this person, or that she could have been me. Brillant, this is. |
| a silenced revolution 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. I really like the sound of it and the ending. Keep up the great work! |
| Ashelin 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really good. I loved the metaphors, and just the langauge you used. The first part was my favorite. I totally related. Wonderful job. |