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Reviews For: Tomorrow

AJ 2008-06-11 ch 11,	This story needs a serious rewrite or simply taken down. The grammer wasn't good, the paragraphs are all screwed up, and the plot is murky at best. It didn't do much for me, but has some potential.
NewlyBorn 2007-10-29 ch 10,	oh wow... I feel so much for poor Crystal... I mean... wow... anyways, the past ten chapters have been glorious, so please write some more, I'm anxious to see how on earth these people that love her are going to get past her wall and get her to love and trust again... good job thus far, keep it up!
BeautifulAssassin 2007-09-11 ch 9,	omigod! please, please, please write more soon! I'm hooked!
BeautifulAssassin 2007-06-27 ch 8,	I love this chapter! keep updating!
Rina Seriko the fallen ange... 2007-06-14 ch 8,	Yay Europe! ^-^ I've been to London, a while back. It's nice the people are too. Have you been? I saw the Big Ben while I was there and I got to go inside too, that was fun. Anyway, loving the story and I can't wait for the next chapter. BTW, my story is finally done, after some editing and such. I'll send it to you in a few days. -Rina
BeautifulAssassin 2007-05-18 ch 7,	Wow, I love your story! Crystal is a great charecter! Keep updating, I can't wait for more!
Tófa 2007-05-18 ch 7,	Hej! I like your story very much. Don't know what else to say because I'm really bad at reviewing :P
Rina Seriko the fallen ange... 2007-04-04 ch 6,	Terra is CRAZY! I love your story so much and your writing style is amazing. Now that I read all 6 chapters I am completely mesmerized in your story plot. I can’t wait for the next chapter. I feel so drawn into your story like I would be in the story in person. That’s what people look for in great stories. Plus forget the facts and the stupid teachers, they are all critics anyway. I hate sticking to facts too, and I love writing in abstract and unique forms. Detail is one of the most difficult writing style an author can have and you have it. So good for you Terra. (also to comment “eh”) I must concur (with Terra) Jason and Dustin are completely different people (personalities alone) Aw but both of them make a cute match for Crystal. Hee-hee, well keep up the great work Terra. I hope to see more of your unique and detailed writing style soon. ~ Rina Seriko P.S. OMG...Crystals father! "Dun-dundun" (dramatic music plays)
eh 2007-03-30 ch 5,	u know jason and dustin sound like they could be the same person.u know wat i mean. they both sound pretty familiar to me.anybody u know?
Rina Seriko the fallen ange... 2007-03-29 ch 1,	Hey there, Well I really like your story so far. It has a really good plot and your writing stlye is really great. Honestly Its hard to find people with such good writing skills. Clapps for Terra. Anyway the only thing I guess I can say, is that your chapters are a little to long so break them down a little it will give you more chapters and people like stories that are long. Hee-Hee then again I have no right to talk because many of my stories are long too. Ha-Ha well other than that, yay I love your character Sabrina. Actually that might just be because that's my name, ha-ha yeah. funny that the discription of your character is just how I look. Awesome, well I am just babbling on over here. "Click Click" Adds to favorites. well I will keep reading and you keep up the good work. Bye ^-^ ~Rina Seriko P.S. Evanescence Rocks!

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