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| ohthevoices 2007-04-11 ch 1,   | I love the last line. It's definitely something that can stick with people. |
| Arabian Knight 2007-04-04 ch 1, | Very wistful. I especially like "it's too late to look forward...". Maybe a bit short to express the full extent of the person's feelings, but definitely something most people can identify themselves with (me included). Keep writing. Arabian Knight |
| Princess-anna57 2007-03-29 ch 1, | Ohh, that's really sad. You have a really good way of writing. I like this a lot. Keep it up. ~Anna~ ^_^ |