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violet blossom
2008-08-18
ch 15,
abuseOh. My. God. He's going to be in a deep shit, isn't he? Running off from the brothers isn't the smartest move.. Oh, I can't wait for another chapter! I really really love this..

ps. I agree about the dark knight! it's the coolest movie ever...
violet blossom
2008-08-17
ch 2,
abuseHi! I just start reading this story.. It seems really interesting.. I like the main characters.. Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters..

ps. So their project is on Gone With The Wind.. It's my favorite book ever! and it's funny that her name is Beau...
Kjersti
2008-08-12
ch 15, anon.
abuseOh my. Gawd, can't the bet just be done with, so they can admit to wanting to be together even without it? I mean, they'll still win it if they just break up and get back together again after a reasonable amount of time... They're killing me here.

I love Beau's brothers. They're great. Although Bowen *is* a bit too childish at times. :D

Very good chapter. I loved how you wrote the party - very realistic. Can't wait to read more!
caralene
2008-08-11
ch 15,
abuseWell that was one heck of a party
PrincessNancy
2008-08-11
ch 15,
abuseI have a few things to say, that I had in my mind.

Firstly; OMG OMG OMG! You thanked me, I'm so on cloud nine!! Thanks :D That means a lot to me!

Secondly, I LOVE CAL!

Thirdly, it's about time that Cal and Beau craved in to their hormones. I bet, this is going to be the downfall of their bet; or the drama begins... now!

Fourthly, Poor Cal, he's going to suffer the wrath of Brick and Bowen...

Fifthly, I wonder when Bri and Brick will hook up. DOn't deny, we all know they will, or atleast hope that they will.

Lastly, Hilarious chapter, especially, the Baby Beezelbub Finnegan, Little Lilith Finnegan, I couldn't stop laughing!

I sure hope that she doesn't get pregnant, but if she does, that'll jus enhance the drama, right? :P

I think that's all I have to say.. :D
aicha
2008-08-07
ch 15,
abuseI can't WAIT for the next chapter!
xXreader.Desu.Yoxx
2008-08-05
ch 15, anon.
abuseSince i can only review one per chapter, I just decided not to log in.
BECAUSE- I didn't leave a proper review last time.
Maybe because i'm reading this story every once in a while, I dont know-this act between the two seemed so surreal!
These kind of storylines are overused, but You! You pulled off this original plot into a whole new level! I read your questionaire on SKOW, and you're apsolutely right about Cal. I can imagine him, his every move, his 'swagger', because he just feels that real. But, now- they slept together. Maybe I'm wrong for categorizing this story. Im excited to read what will happen, now.
Oh no, dont tell me she gets pregnent!
thatcrazychickcindy
2008-08-05
ch 15,
abuseOh shit.
Finally.
They finally gave into their strongest desire.
Wow, that was amazing.
And funny.
Especially the morning after.
I can only imagine Beau's face if she ever heard that. And I can only dream of her reply.

Thanks for writing.
XD
Avidreader222
2008-08-04
ch 15,
abusewow...im so scared for beau and cal...if she is pregnant that would be so bad!! please update soon!
Cara
2008-08-04
ch 15, anon.
abuseWow...Cal is dead. Deadydeaddead. Almost amuisngly so. I wonder who'll kill him first, Bowen&Brick, or Beau. Hmm. XD
sunny-raindrop
2008-08-04
ch 15,
abuseIt isn't weird. I like the ending. :)
Hm, maybe I haven't written a review for this story yet but I like to reassure worried writers. :) I like this story and as I see the real excitement is still ahead of us. I'm looking forward to it!
make this mistake
2008-08-04
ch 15,
abuseI don't know why you don't like this chapter. I think it's probably the best one so far. Development-wise, a lot more happened here than in any of the others.

Also, I voted for you. :D
Lily Llynn
2008-08-04
ch 15,
abuseYowza. After all the chemistry/sexual tension, I knew this was bound to happen, but dang. :P Seeing the consequences played out will be... interesting.
I'm glad to see their friends again, well at least, his friends (there seemed to be a lack of them for awhile) - so I have to ask: Do they still hang out with their friends a lot? If so, wouldn't they suspect something?
In any case, a very eventful chapter, and I can't wait for the next one, which is bound to be exciting. :D
xXReader.Desu.YoXx
2008-08-03
ch 15,
abuseOHMYGOD?!?!
rainbabie
2008-08-03
ch 15,
abuseOMG. I can't believe it happened. For some reason I thought she was still a virgin. But, I guess it's just that she's capable of keeping her legs closed. Good for her! I love this chapter. Can't wait for the next. Hopefully Beau is on the pill! LOL, I'm looking forward to the confrontation with Cal and the brothers!
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