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| Fan Fan 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseI can't stop smiling as I read the signature of Heart, sincerely :) classical beautiful work. |
| theatrical rhapsodies 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abusei know how this feels (dont we all?) this poem is simple and to the piont, not to many pronouns or works not needed. its simpleisity is deep and you can tell just what your going though. to me, in this poem by having short lines it gives the feel that you are worn out and at the end of your rope. if im compreatly wrong then sorry but thats just how it came out to me. very good poem. Love, Ellen |
| BrokenHeartedAngel 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuseWOW I LUV THIS! ITS AWSOMENESS! |
| DaGitt 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abusewow. every word fit perfectly, and you captured the mood. amazing! |
| Ashelin 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuseUhg, I loved this. Exactly how I feel, and exactly what I'm telling myself. This was wonderful. "but I couldn't stop myself/no matter how hard I tried" Wonderful job! |