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| stunninglyaverage 2008-07-15 ch 1,  | abuseUhh...woah. That might be a bit of a problem. |
| x.betweenthelines 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseso cute...! nice oneshot. =) |
| katieee 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseI loved this. Especially the ending. :] It was really cute. |
| Skylene 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abusethats was good i dont like stories that finish and seem to need to go on...but than again most endings are poop...oh wat the hell im just fussy...but thats a good story |
| GANGSTAR 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseHow unexpected! haha, this was great :) |
| giRLAddiCted 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseAGH! CUTE! But pretty sudden. Many errors :p And dude...do you have an obsession with black haired dudes with grey eyes hm?? |
| Laney 2008-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice story! It was quite an unexpected ending. In the beginning i thought that Oliver was her stepbrother, but after a while I changed my mind and thought that it was her friend, since most stories end that way. This story reminds me of a TV-series from Taiwan called "Devil beside you". It's the same thing, a guy and a girl fall in love after their respective parents are married. |
| Boo 2007-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abusewow that is something unexpected! i never saw this one coming!:D cool=)) i loved it^^ |
| california kills 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseNO! This can't just be a one-shot, it's too good for that! *sigh* I really liked this! |
| x3life 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseaw this was really good!! but i wanna know what happends next!! haha =) |
| Alenor 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseheya, this was good. i think, if that situation happened in real life, and i'm sure it does sometimes, i would feel really sorry for the step-siblings, they would feel they can't do anything about their feelings as they're "related" but yet they're not actually related so it's perfectly ok for them to feel that way if they only became step-siblings after their formative years. if they grew up with each other then it might be a bit weird...ahh well, this was good. cya later ~ Alenor. |
| 77-LiLiAnA-77 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseI'm a sucker for good one-shots,and I definitely loved this one! The whole bathroom scene was amazing... |
| d666lisa 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseBRILLIANT STORY I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING LOL :-D |
| Beautiful Kuuipo 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseoh cute! xDD he must have luv her before he became her stepbrother! luv it! |
| RoseLife 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuseWoah! i SO didnt see that last bit coming! but it was totally awsome, great great! XD ~RL~ |