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Reviews For: Dirty Little Secret - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

blazingstar1994
2008-11-25
ch 1,
continue! please
Velvet Charm
2008-11-21
ch 1,
It was suprising, but unique. I love it.
Martin the Waterskier
2008-11-17
ch 1,
I adore the title first off all.
It reminds me of that song "Dirty Little Secret" by All American Rejects and then it reminds me of Post Secret.

I love how you keep us in suspense throughout most of the one-shot and how we the readers have no clue who it is till the very end.

I also love the way you wrote the ending.
I dunno, but they way you wrote it kinda made it seem more effective [?].
I don't know if that's the word I'm looking for, but oh well.

Story=GREAT!

I've came back to this story many times because of the memorable plot and writing, and even favorited it [i think] but I realized that I never ever reviewed it.
So I reread it, and now I'm reviewing. Uhm. Yeah.
Thanks for the wonderful read.

kthnxbye,

Martin the Waterskier
stunninglyaverage
2008-07-15
ch 1,
Uhh...woah. That might be a bit of a problem.
x.betweenthelines
2008-06-02
ch 1,
so cute...!
nice oneshot.
=)
katieee
2008-05-19
ch 1,
I loved this. Especially the ending. :] It was really cute.
Skylene
2008-04-16
ch 1,
thats was good
i dont like stories that finish and seem to need to go on...but than again most endings are poop...oh wat the hell im just fussy...but thats a good story
GANGSTAR
2008-02-29
ch 1,
How unexpected! haha, this was great :)
giRLAddiCted
2008-02-05
ch 1,
AGH! CUTE! But pretty sudden. Many errors :p And dude...do you have an obsession with black haired dudes with grey eyes hm??
Laney
2008-02-05
ch 1,
Nice story!

It was quite an unexpected ending. In the beginning i thought that Oliver was her stepbrother, but after a while I changed my mind and thought that it was her friend, since most stories end that way.

This story reminds me of a TV-series from Taiwan called "Devil beside you". It's the same thing, a guy and a girl fall in love after their respective parents are married.
Boo
2007-12-27
ch 1,
wow that is something unexpected! i never saw this one coming!:D cool=)) i loved it^^
california kills
2007-12-16
ch 1,
NO! This can't just be a one-shot, it's too good for that! *sigh* I really liked this!
x3life
2007-12-09
ch 1,
aw this was really good!! but i wanna know what happends next!! haha =)
Alenor
2007-11-29
ch 1,
heya, this was good. i think, if that situation happened in real life, and i'm sure it does sometimes, i would feel really sorry for the step-siblings, they would feel they can't do anything about their feelings as they're "related" but yet they're not actually related so it's perfectly ok for them to feel that way if they only became step-siblings after their formative years. if they grew up with each other then it might be a bit weird...ahh well, this was good. cya later ~ Alenor.
77-LiLiAnA-77
2007-11-23
ch 1,
I'm a sucker for good one-shots,and I definitely loved this one! The whole bathroom scene was amazing...
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