this was really interesting. :)

i love the way you've presented the characters.

nicky is awesome. she would totes be my friend.

i'm very curious as to why joanne hates teen mothers, tho.

are you continuing this? because i'd love to see where it's going. :)

Wow, I enjoyed this story. I think the background stories came out a bit fast, a little to ready, and I'm curious why Joanne doesn't like teenage mothers. But in just a short story I actually got into the characters. I was wishing there was more to it. Sounds like it would be really nice.

I liked it!

I admire you, I can't write very good short story. ^^

Rowan.

Hahaha. I think you've got considerable talent.

This was very funny. Nice work. Keep it up.