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| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-05-07 ch 1,   | Oh, very nice. I do like the way you've weaved your words here - very artistic and poetic indeed. The last stanza is especially wonderful, with your use of sound coming out full force ("sable steel" and "austere . . . allure"). Wonderful. Keep writing! :) |
| BelovedOfAslan 2007-04-04 ch 1, | Wonderful. I love the last four lines - |