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no.peace.los.angeles
2007-05-07
ch 1,
Oh, very nice. I do like the way you've weaved your words here - very artistic and poetic indeed. The last stanza is especially wonderful, with your use of sound coming out full force ("sable steel" and "austere . . . allure"). Wonderful. Keep writing! :)
BelovedOfAslan
2007-04-04
ch 1,
Wonderful. I love the last four lines -
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