AMAZING story! I was completely hooked and read the whole thing instead of doing my homework. lol Great job with the storyline! *runs to read the sequel*

awesome story ^^ this is going into my c2 ^_^

I loved it! It was a very entertaining read. I will start working on the next right away!

Yay! Happy ending!

Pretty intense chapter. Who was that stranger? I have my suspicions has to his identity, and what he's doing...I hope Kaymy doesn't turn against Sai/Ashita! T.T

An interesting revelation as to what the Gokaku want from Sai/Ashita. Now I'm concerned as to what they plan to do...and what Sai will do.

Excellent chapter all around, great development for all three of them. Can't wait to read on; so much suspense! XD

Wow...poor Sai. Poor Kaymy. T.T That's so sad...but now I know who Sai - Ashita - is. And why would they go after Kaymy's parents?

I caught a couple mistakes - mostly letters missing from words, and once, toward the end, you spelled Kaymy 'Kraymy'. Also: [...that I man held back...] - I think you meant '...am held back...'?

Still very intriguing...good emotional chapter. Can't wait to see what happens from here. ;)

Ah, I see there's finally going to be a glimpse into Sai's past! My interest is certainly piqued. Who were those men, and how do they know Sai?

One thing to mention: [...peered worriedly at him in concern.] - this is a little redundant. Either 'worriedly' or 'in concern' is unnecessary; either one gets the point across. ;)

Very exciting - great chapter! XD

Poor Kaymy is right. :( I like how Sai stands up for her, and I think he's right. Perhaps she's not totally useless...

"Forest man." XD Although, the kid was not far off - he certainly 'did' seem like a forest man. Maybe a hint of his unknown past?

And so things keep getting more and more interesting...as always, I loved it, and look forward to reading the rest. XD

I think this was the best chapter so far. I loved the descriptions of the forest, and how Sai figured out what happened to the boy. ;)

Anyway, there was one mistake I noticed: '...intense blew eyes...' - Wrong 'blue', I believe. XD Other than that, awesome chapter, as always!

Great couple of chapters. I love the parts you do with Sai - and I like Kaymy, too. Well done! XD

A wonderful opening. I've always loved stories with characters who've lost their memory - it proves to be quite interesting, and this is no exception. ;) Sai seems very intruiging, and I like Reimi already.

I liked the switch from third- to first-person POV, though it was a little abrupt. Anyway, nice job - I look forward to continuing. ;)

Well that's a really good beginning and premise for the story. Very Jason Bourne :). The narrative shift from third to first was cool but a little jarring.

The writing style and imagery in the italicized part is tight. The disability Sai is faced with has a lot of conflict potential. I'll be reading, nice job!

interesting ending. i really liked the way that you mixed up past and present. the sequel will be interesting!

ooh!! great cliffie!! very exciting!

I was waiting for Kaymy to find her part in this story! this is really interesting, I can't stop readng!