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Adenil 2008-03-17 ch 1,	You are so good at what you do. No obvious mistakes for me to nag you with, just really good poetry. Of words mingled with fears/And a trapped happiness/Longing to release Perfect, these lines really express the feel of the poem.
Wet Dream 2007-03-30 ch 1,	this is actually the best thing i've read in a while. kudos
a silenced revolution 2007-03-30 ch 1,	Very interesting, with some truly beautiful wording and intriguing metaphors. I especially love "Don’t know why It hurts when I can't pour your tears into my eyes" It seems that the narrator is feeling bad not only about his or her own emotional pain and unhappiness, but also those of another, which makes the piece even more touching. The poem doesn't mention who "you" is, and it doesn't mention exactly what's wrong with the lives of the poor main characters, and I think that leaves a note of wonderment in the readers mind. I read it fourtimes over and enjoyed it's melancholy tones more each time. Overall, very poignant and intriguing piece. Marvelous work and many kudos. (WOW. Isn't amazing how I can so easily make myself sound like I know what I'm talking about when I revew? :D" PS I'm not sure if you meant "troubled" when you said " troubling head"...