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Reviews For: Scared to Love You

LeoOsaka
2007-03-30
ch 1,
abuseI don't know how you are about commenting on the writing and telling you any mistakes, so I'll refrain from doing that, since I don't know how you would take it.

This poem makes sense, touches on human emotions a great deal. You seem to stress a rhyme scheme a little too hard and it throws off the rhythm a bit, but over all it looks good and you've got a solid subject too! Keep writing!
Heihana
2007-03-30
ch 1,
abuseThis is pretty cool.
I like it.
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