hi author...

i really liked it...i mean, everyone has prolly been stuck on someone for either a short time span or long. it captures my feelings, haha, i love it like crazy crazy, and no tmr!!

That was really cool. You get an emotional response from the reader with your angsty descriptions of couldashouldawould'ves of the main character. And the dialogue was genius. The familiar way with which the characters talked to one another was really cool.

Great story so far. From my opinion, I don't think you should continue it because it's pretty good as a one shot. I love how it carries a 'winter wonderland' them throughout the piece. Well Done

I like this very much, it's written well. Only typo is instead of "I’m about to call for her," it should be, " I'm about to call for you," But, seeing as how you didn't proofread, that's pretty dang good to have only one typo :) Keep up the good work.
Faith

15 minutes, amazing! what can i say, I really liked it, it was nice...even though it brought me a sad smile because of the sad ending,but as they say "we realise the true value of what we have only after we loose them"

that was good but itll be hard to extendd

Aw! That was so cute! I loved it! The ending is so real, it's amazing. I don't want to let you go again...thought that many times before...many many times...fabulous job! And this only took you fifteen minutes? Wow, you're good!

Enchanting.. but I couldn't feel anything in my heart for some reason.. Maybe it might be the fact that I'm neutral in love XD