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| Striped Candycane 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseYou. Are. Brilliant. Normaly, I don't want to stroke anyone's ego (there are enough airheads at it is), but you really deserve the praise. I have been reading through your work, and your poems radiate ghostly yet vivid images that erupt with emotions. This one is especially strong. My favorite verse is probably: "At the hapless sea of khaki". Great work! |
| Elenive 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abuseThis one is somewhat hard to follow, but the emotion is very real. Sometimes the imagery takes the piece over a little bit, but it's well done. |
| misunderstood melody 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abusethis is very emotional.ur very talented. |
| longlox 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abusehow important does this make you feel. oh yeah. i bet you're getting hot feeling so important right now. oh you're so dirty. |