You. Are. Brilliant. Normaly, I don't want to stroke anyone's ego (there are enough airheads at it is), but you really deserve the praise. I have been reading through your work, and your poems radiate ghostly yet vivid images that erupt with emotions. This one is especially strong. My favorite verse is probably: "At the hapless sea of khaki". Great work!

This one is somewhat hard to follow, but the emotion is very real. Sometimes the imagery takes the piece over a little bit, but it's well done.

this is very emotional.ur very talented.

how important does this make you feel. oh yeah. i bet you're getting hot feeling so important right now. oh you're so dirty.