Reviews for Hapless Sea of Khaki

Striped Candycane 2007-05-14 ch 1,	abuseYou. Are. Brilliant. Normaly, I don't want to stroke anyone's ego (there are enough airheads at it is), but you really deserve the praise. I have been reading through your work, and your poems radiate ghostly yet vivid images that erupt with emotions. This one is especially strong. My favorite verse is probably: "At the hapless sea of khaki". Great work!
Elenive 2007-05-07 ch 1,	abuseThis one is somewhat hard to follow, but the emotion is very real. Sometimes the imagery takes the piece over a little bit, but it's well done.
misunderstood melody 2007-05-05 ch 1,	abusethis is very emotional.ur very talented.
longlox 2007-04-27 ch 1,	abusehow important does this make you feel. oh yeah. i bet you're getting hot feeling so important right now. oh you're so dirty.