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| aridelaine 2007-03-30 ch 1,   | I loved it! It was well written. I loved the first stanza and the repetition really added to the poem. Excellent job! Keep writing! |
| The Postscript 2007-03-30 ch 1, | Really beautiful, from beginning to end. The loose repetition really adds to the message -- "The blood still streams through our veins" ... but my favorite lines were at the beginning "You never left my side, my second silhouette." This poem was nicely written, polished, and presented! Great work. Keep writing, k. |