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| shooting stars and secrets 2007-04-12 ch 1,   | "revenge spitting from heaven in the form of rain, " This poem is erie. But it is ohsobeautiful. I love it. It flows so perfectly. I especially like the last two lines... Adding to faves. |
| Emily ^^ 2007-04-08 ch 1, | Hiya! Me reporting from holiday! ^^ lol I LOVE this one - your imagery is as great as ever, and I love the way the flow of the poem changes with the last line. ^_^ |
| Tell Me Tall Tales 2007-04-04 ch 1, | Now THAT'S pretty! I love your use of alliteration "sang with the sound seeping silently/what was written/fell too fast" It adds punch to your poem. Great write, I'm favoriting this one :-) ~Lili |
| i.am.the.winter 2007-03-30 ch 1, | beautiful. =) - i.am.the.winter |
| bratja 2007-03-30 ch 1, | "revenge spitting from heaven in the form of rain, & reflections fluctuating on the glass window until they’ve smudged into yesterday." Gorgeous lines. |