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| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-03-31 ch 1,   | I always find it interesting when a poem's language matches its subject. By that I mean you used masculine words throughout this - it felt manly. Very cool. I like your style, it's quite the visual piece. Really interesting piece. Keep writing! :) |