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WarCape 2008-11-21 ch 3,	I have a slight feeling I'm a year too late to review but I don't care. Anyway; this is amazing. I love all the characters in the book - they've all got the likability factor. Love the story as a whole - good job. ~WarCape~
DarkSweetRose 2007-05-13 ch 11,	hey! aww this is soo good plz do update soon asap! dont stop writnig im dyin to know what happens next its so sad and romantic :) i'm so loving this story omg lol i almost cried the last chp:) lol... anywayz so plz do update i will be puttin this on ALERT and favorite so just to let u know i'll be waitin for the next chp for u to update!! :) keep it up itz really good!!
I Quoth Nevermore 2007-05-04 ch 9,	Great update. SO cute, with scenes about David and Izzy. Please update soon!
Cirien Phoenix 2007-05-02 ch 1,	Well, while you're trying to make it sweet, all I can think of are the statutory rapes you keep hearing about in the news because the student was a minor. I know that's not what you're going for, but to have a student in a situation like this can be taken the wrong way. Since, I know that you meant this in a good way, I'll continue. The descriptive words you use are generally pretty good, but some words get over used. Like "smile." Try "grin" or "smirk" or other synonyms more often to help break up the repetition. Other than that, this was a good start for a story. ~Cirien Phoenix P.S. Thanks for reviewing "Why I Don't Deserve to Love Again." Gosh, to know what I did, it's easier to read the second chapter rather than have me explain it all here. Thanks for enjoying it!
I Quoth Nevermore 2007-04-30 ch 8,	This was cute. And the cancer is gone? Yay! Please update soon. Hopefully no one catches them...
I Quoth Nevermore 2007-04-21 ch 7,	Oh my gosh! Great update! This is getting good (not that it wasn't already;]) UPDATE!
punkturnedwriter 2007-04-21 ch 7,	I loved this chapter because I got to see more of Izzy and Nicky's friendship. I like them both :-). I like the fact that you put in so many details that the events seem real.
I Quoth Nevermore 2007-04-16 ch 6,	Good job on fixing chapter five. This chapter was good, but I would have added in a few scenes of the Izzy and David actually sneaking around. That would have been interesting. Right now the readers don't actually get to understand the relationship between the characters since you didn't give insight on what they had to do to be together. But you don't have to listen to me. It's just what I would have done. Anyways, great chapter. Please update soon!
ChikinFairy 2007-04-14 ch 4,	oh my gosh! Update soon. The story is going really well. Update soon. I hate waiting too long :P
punkturnedwriter 2007-04-10 ch 5,	I just cut my hair, lol. It was waist-length and now it's chin-length. Not that it's anything LIKE Iz's condition, but...haha, I feel a little bereaved. Anyway, great chapter. Very mysterious...what's happening? Why was that man in her house? I like the part where she's cutting again...very emotional. The part where she goes to David's and the events after that...it's a LITTLE rushed, though. Keep writing.
I Quoth Nevermore 2007-04-09 ch 5,	Good update, but I was a little confused...So, someone was in her house, she stabbed him with the knife, she runs to Mr. Rydan's house, he doesn't question her at all and they fall asleep (a little unrealistic, to be honest.) Maybe you could have added a reason why Mr. Rydan didn't question her. Something that he tells himself just to he can relax with her in his arms. And when Izzy whispers that she just stabbed someone, what? He's not going to say anything about that? So he kisses her after her announcement about stabbing someone. Not the first thing I would do, you know. Did I understand right that she cut herself? Anyways, why doesn't her mum realize her daughter stabbed someone? I mean, even if the guy was able to get away, there would probably be blood. And who in there right mind wouldn't tell someone they were attacked in their house and stabbed the guy? But I did like how you wrote the poem between the lines of what was happening. And the bit about the ink flowing out of her pen like blood was a great description. Don't get me wrong, this is great and I love your story, but I thought this chapter was a little confusing. Please update soon! And please don't hate me for my brutal comments! UPDATE!
punkturnedwriter 2007-04-08 ch 4,	Thank you for answering what it is about Iz that Mr Rydan likes. Wow, I'm gripped. Who can possibly be 'watching' her? Or is she just paranoid? The bit at the hospital was a little scary, but the scenes with Mr Rydan were sort of...bittersweet. Update soon!
LiL PiNk 9o 2007-04-07 ch 4,	hm this is interesting and scary and how old is Mr. Rydan?
I Quoth Nevermore 2007-04-07 ch 4,	What "feeling" does she get? Gasp! Please update.
punkturnedwriter 2007-04-01 ch 3,	I'm sorry Iz has cancer - it seems like she's someone with a bright future, so I really hope the cnacer isn't deadly. Can you tell us more about Mr Rydan in the forthcoming chapters? Like how old he is, what exactly it is that he likes about his student, where he lives, his family...I'm sure all that's coming later, so I'm impatient for an update! I like it, definitely.

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