Love it. Of course. Hey! You stole my formatting. Oh well, I forgive.

Nice job. (and lookie at all your reviews!)

Rowan.

i really like it. because it really shows the desire for the person you love. and each of us get to feel that once in a while. i think i read it at a perfect time for me. it is really good!

Really just beautiful. Keep writing!

This was good. It was interesting how you positioned the stanzas. I like it. Keep this up!