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| Perfectly Paradox 2008-05-14 ch 1,   | Jeezles peezles! You've done it again! I love the depth and the very original way you phrase your ideas. It's so intense. I love your writing style. I'm going to go read some more of your stuff. :D |
| re x invented 2007-04-10 ch 1, | i love the emotion i find in people's writings. it's inspiring. you're inspiring. i'm so glad i started back on this site. i love poetry, it's the sould at its most exposed, human condition at its most tragic. this is no exception. _till tonight do us part |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-04-03 ch 1, | It's interesting to me how you never really tell the reader where it is that you've "gone away to" but it's none the less fascinating. I loved the line about being heavier then light - light always seems so weightless, it was a powerful proclomation. A truely unique piece, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |
| lackluster 2007-04-02 ch 1, | the raw yet subdued effect this has is just shattering. this is brilliant. there's so many ways to interpret it i almost don't want to know the truth. and that last stanza is heartbreakingly gorgeous. |
| recycle rhymes 2007-04-01 ch 1, | wow pretty. i like the last stanza. very poignant. nice work...and keep writing. |