Reviews for How Can You Stay - FictionPress.com

Nemonus 2008-05-10 ch 1,	Excellent. I can identify with this one--but I do not think that it is only because of that that this poem feels dense and evokes well the feelings it talks about, of capture and distance. Interesting format; the repetition adds to the impact.
Jitterrue 2007-07-25 ch 1,	I agree! I welcome my chances to evade reality. I like how this flows and I like the concept