| Reviews for Try Not to Choke |
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EAV 4/3/07 . chapter 1 Wow...this poem makes me wonder what you think about. Reading this makes me feel like I've seen a part of the world through different eyes. I hope you don't choke...who else will eat twice-baked potatoes with me- |
bR0k3N 3/31/07 . chapter 1This was good I loved it. and for the double spacing... all you need to do is hit Shift and Enter... lol |
SerialXLain 3/30/07 . chapter 1This has to be the best poem you've written. It flows so perfectly...and it makes my chest hurt. I love it. The first verse is probably my favorite, but...all of it's just...so pretty... xo :favorites it: |
magalina 3/30/07 . chapter 1Nice, I liked it. |