|Reviews for Try Not to Choke|
| EAV 4/3/07 . chapter 1
Wow...this poem makes me wonder what you think about. Reading this makes me feel like I've seen a part of the world through different eyes. I hope you don't choke...who else will eat twice-baked potatoes with me-
| bR0k3N 3/31/07 . chapter 1
This was good I loved it. and for the double spacing... all you need to do is hit Shift and Enter...
| SerialXLain 3/30/07 . chapter 1
This has to be the best poem you've written. It flows so perfectly...and it makes my chest hurt. I love it. The first verse is probably my favorite, but...all of it's just...so pretty...
| magalina 3/30/07 . chapter 1
Nice, I liked it.