Deep...

It was alluringly written, and I love the feeling and format of the poem.

I like the repition of goodbye.. and the line about old feelings never dying because its so true... very bittersweet piece.. i like it a lot

goodbyes aren't appreciated much.

Beautifully written. I like.

Beautiful. This reminds me of one of those extended movie scenes in which two characters must part . . . "goodbye" is definitely one of the hardest last words we all face at some point. I don't know if you have read "History of Love" by Nicole Krauss but there are many of these moments in that book as well. A wonderful book. Well, great write ... especially the first stanza. The loose rythem really gives this the right, almost tumbling feel. Keep writing, k.

That was so sweet... I loved it. You have a talent for this. Great job!! This is going on my favorites *Wipes away a tear from eye* It was sad, but it's the truth about so many relationships. Great work, and keep writing.

reminds me of graduation. i guess lots of resolved feelings happen when a chapter ends. nice work.