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.dear. Disaster 2007-04-25 ch 1,	Deep... It was alluringly written, and I love the feeling and format of the poem.
simpleplan13 2007-04-16 ch 1,	I like the repition of goodbye.. and the line about old feelings never dying because its so true... very bittersweet piece.. i like it a lot
Aquafied 2007-04-08 ch 1,	goodbyes aren't appreciated much.
a silenced revolution 2007-04-08 ch 1,	Beautifully written. I like.
The Postscript 2007-03-31 ch 1,	Beautiful. This reminds me of one of those extended movie scenes in which two characters must part . . . "goodbye" is definitely one of the hardest last words we all face at some point. I don't know if you have read "History of Love" by Nicole Krauss but there are many of these moments in that book as well. A wonderful book. Well, great write ... especially the first stanza. The loose rythem really gives this the right, almost tumbling feel. Keep writing, k.
Hermione-Hermyown 2007-03-30 ch 1,	That was so sweet... I loved it. You have a talent for this. Great job!! This is going on my favorites Wipes away a tear from eye It was sad, but it's the truth about so many relationships. Great work, and keep writing.
recycle rhymes 2007-03-30 ch 1,	reminds me of graduation. i guess lots of resolved feelings happen when a chapter ends. nice work.