That was so sweet. And we know that they get together as they are mentioned in another story.

I love how subtle it is :D

very very cute!! i liked it a lot, along with your writing style which is very smooth and easy to read. luvs it.

Oh, dear Lord! That was spectacular.
Your writing is seriously superb.
It's so nice to read and understandable,
with near-perfect grammar and punctuation.

And the story line? My goodness, the story line.
What a wonderful view of their friendship.
And the dialogue was always a blast to read.
Wow, this story was simply amazing.

Great job.
I love this. :)

-Dana.

Aha! I knew I'd find the one that had Kian and Erick in it! XD It was sweetly adorable.

Aw, cute. ;)

You know you could make this a longer story *hinthint*. Even so I like it how it is, I am particularly fond of the characters. Good Job!
^_^ phangirl ^_^

:D I loved it. It seemed laid-back and mild. And I liked the office setting.

Nice one-shot. :)

aw, that was cute :D Keep it up!

Subtly delicious. =3

Aw that was so cute! I was grinning the entire time XD I loved it

Hey there :) Just read this story, and I found it enjoyable. It got my attention and kept me reading until the end, so that's saying something :P For such a short story, I think you did a very nice job of creating likeable characters that I was rooting for. I like that you didn't over-do the flirtation.

Some of the exchange with the women and the men at the water cooler sounds a little bit awkward, but overall it was definately an enjoyable read.

aww...a short and sweet piece! :) much love!