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frogs of war 2009-05-10 . chapter 1
That was so sweet. And we know that they get together as they are mentioned in another story.
gumdropspimp 2008-10-31 . chapter 1
I love how subtle it is :D
notauseryetxD 2008-10-21 . chapter 1
very very cute!! i liked it a lot, along with your writing style which is very smooth and easy to read. luvs it.
legodaynuhxx 2008-08-20 . chapter 1
Oh, dear Lord! That was spectacular.
Your writing is seriously superb.
It's so nice to read and understandable,
with near-perfect grammar and punctuation.

And the story line? My goodness, the story line.
What a wonderful view of their friendship.
And the dialogue was always a blast to read.
Wow, this story was simply amazing.

Great job.
I love this. :)

-Dana.
Catseye*Rose 2008-08-03 . chapter 1
Aha! I knew I'd find the one that had Kian and Erick in it! XD It was sweetly adorable.
Apnoea 2008-06-14 . chapter 1
Aw, cute. ;)
phangirl27 2007-12-22 . chapter 1
You know you could make this a longer story *hinthint*. Even so I like it how it is, I am particularly fond of the characters. Good Job!
^_^ phangirl ^_^
Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-07-10 . chapter 1
:D I loved it. It seemed laid-back and mild. And I liked the office setting.

Nice one-shot. :)
magalina 2007-06-26 . chapter 1
aw, that was cute :D Keep it up!
applecinnamon 2007-06-12 . chapter 1
Subtly delicious. =3
Cealex 2007-04-10 . chapter 1
Aw that was so cute! I was grinning the entire time XD I loved it
razzamatazza 2007-03-30 . chapter 1
Hey there :) Just read this story, and I found it enjoyable. It got my attention and kept me reading until the end, so that's saying something :P For such a short story, I think you did a very nice job of creating likeable characters that I was rooting for. I like that you didn't over-do the flirtation.

Some of the exchange with the women and the men at the water cooler sounds a little bit awkward, but overall it was definately an enjoyable read.
Rice-Ball247 2007-03-30 . chapter 1
aww...a short and sweet piece! :) much love!
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