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Reviews For: Two Suits

gumdropspimp
2008-10-31
ch 1,
I love how subtle it is :D
notauseryetxD
2008-10-21
ch 1,
very very cute!! i liked it a lot, along with your writing style which is very smooth and easy to read. luvs it.
legodaynuhxx
2008-08-20
ch 1,
Oh, dear Lord! That was spectacular.
Your writing is seriously superb.
It's so nice to read and understandable,
with near-perfect grammar and punctuation.

And the story line? My goodness, the story line.
What a wonderful view of their friendship.
And the dialogue was always a blast to read.
Wow, this story was simply amazing.

Great job.
I love this. :)

-Dana.
Catseye*Rose
2008-08-03
ch 1,
Aha! I knew I'd find the one that had Kian and Erick in it! XD It was sweetly adorable.
Apnoea
2008-06-14
ch 1,
Aw, cute. ;)
phangirl27
2007-12-22
ch 1,
You know you could make this a longer story *hinthint*. Even so I like it how it is, I am particularly fond of the characters. Good Job!
^_^ phangirl ^_^
Rock on an Ocean Shore
2007-07-10
ch 1,
:D I loved it. It seemed laid-back and mild. And I liked the office setting.

Nice one-shot. :)
magalina
2007-06-26
ch 1,
aw, that was cute :D Keep it up!
applecinnamon
2007-06-12
ch 1,
Subtly delicious. =3
Kailum
2007-04-10
ch 1,
Aw that was so cute! I was grinning the entire time XD I loved it
razzamatazza
2007-03-30
ch 1,
Hey there :) Just read this story, and I found it enjoyable. It got my attention and kept me reading until the end, so that's saying something :P For such a short story, I think you did a very nice job of creating likeable characters that I was rooting for. I like that you didn't over-do the flirtation.

Some of the exchange with the women and the men at the water cooler sounds a little bit awkward, but overall it was definately an enjoyable read.
Rice-Ball247
2007-03-30
ch 1,
aww...a short and sweet piece! :) much love!
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