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| gumdropspimp 2008-10-31 ch 1, | I love how subtle it is :D |
| notauseryetxD 2008-10-21 ch 1, | very very cute!! i liked it a lot, along with your writing style which is very smooth and easy to read. luvs it. |
| legodaynuhxx 2008-08-20 ch 1, | Oh, dear Lord! That was spectacular. Your writing is seriously superb. It's so nice to read and understandable, with near-perfect grammar and punctuation. And the story line? My goodness, the story line. What a wonderful view of their friendship. And the dialogue was always a blast to read. Wow, this story was simply amazing. Great job. I love this. :) -Dana. |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-08-03 ch 1, | Aha! I knew I'd find the one that had Kian and Erick in it! XD It was sweetly adorable. |
| Apnoea 2008-06-14 ch 1, | Aw, cute. ;) |
| phangirl27 2007-12-22 ch 1, | You know you could make this a longer story *hinthint*. Even so I like it how it is, I am particularly fond of the characters. Good Job! ^_^ phangirl ^_^ |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-07-10 ch 1, | :D I loved it. It seemed laid-back and mild. And I liked the office setting. Nice one-shot. :) |
| magalina 2007-06-26 ch 1, | aw, that was cute :D Keep it up! |
| applecinnamon 2007-06-12 ch 1, | Subtly delicious. =3 |
| Kailum 2007-04-10 ch 1, | Aw that was so cute! I was grinning the entire time XD I loved it |
| razzamatazza 2007-03-30 ch 1, | Hey there :) Just read this story, and I found it enjoyable. It got my attention and kept me reading until the end, so that's saying something :P For such a short story, I think you did a very nice job of creating likeable characters that I was rooting for. I like that you didn't over-do the flirtation. Some of the exchange with the women and the men at the water cooler sounds a little bit awkward, but overall it was definately an enjoyable read. |
| Rice-Ball247 2007-03-30 ch 1, | aww...a short and sweet piece! :) much love! |