I gotta say, this is definitely one of the best poems I've ever read. I congratz you my friend. x3

This poem almost made me cry, James. It's just so real and yet dreamy..."Bring me down/Break my tears" It's so angsty...like Axel XD

I like the title. And that is funny at what you lable your downloaded documents. ahaha.

title name for uploaded documents. I should tell my friend nic that would amuse him. it's a good poem though. I dno't know much about poetry even though I attempt writing it sometimes. I liked it though.

I love the "Twisted chords and/Shattered wails" lines and the thought of empty sails. Sad...

Pretty.

xo

XD

Twat.