That was really awsome, u are a great writer!

it took me less than two days to read
wow
just wow

Very interesting concept you've come up with. Did you create this setting or were you inspired by something? Everything fit together very professionally, and the end was a nice surprise. It was frustrating when it switched perspectives, but I got used to it and it spurred me on to read faster. I really enjoyed this. Great story!

Someone's fan of 1984?!

...I just spent the last two days of my life reading this. That time was so well spent, you don't even know.


somehow, throughout this entire fic I was paranoid that Katherine would turn on them... She seemed too perfect, somehow.

maybe I'll leave a more coherent review later, but
you are amazing. I now need to see what other stuff you have up on this site. Great work! A lot better than some printed stuff I've read :P The plot was fabulous, too. I remember not being able to shut down the computer and not go to bed because I just NEEDED to know what happened in the next scene...
You handled the POV shifts between all three sets of characters fabulously.


but
AH THAT WAS A GREAT READ *stretches*

It was super amazing! I love,love, love it!

Thank you so much for your story. It was a great moment of reading (a great LONG moment which is always nice). Favourite character is Ro-Sim though Katherine is great as well. sometimes there was so much going around that I wanted to know that I thought I'd die before you actually got to it (so many characters doing different things). But all in all it was great and I loved it.

I just finished this story and absolutely love it. Then after I finished it I had a OMG moment, and now I'm having a craving for a smutfest oneshot with Rory, Gavan and Jaime all dominating and ** Kai. That would be HAWT to the Nth degree. You should write one :) (shameless begging and pleading I know)

Oh boy...
What I should have been doing today was studying for my upcoming exams, what I actually did was read your stories. Again. I would say 'thanks' in a cuttingly sarcastic way, but I enjoyed the story way to much to do that :D
A few of my personal highlights: The scene with Gavan and Jaime's finger-sex was incredibly moving, you captured the eroticism and desperation in that scene very well. I loved Ro-Sim (especially his romance in the end!) and how he turned out to have his own special quirks. I like that you let Shen stay faithful to his girl without being a saint. Rory's epiphany with the one-day-window was very hot ;)
And finally, lots of admiration for being able to start and finish a monster of a story like this - apparently in only about 2 months. All I can say is: please write some more like it, but if you would kindly wait until the end of January to post them, my grades would be much obliged :D
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AGAIN, no login. but incase you want to reply, my email is esther1993 at yahoo dot com. i didn't want to put it in actual form cause i think fp will eat it.

but. seriously. i would have reviewd every single one of these chapters, except for the fact that i was trying to marathon-read and just get it all finished, not to mention the fact that i'm suppoesd to be doing history homework. >.>

you write some amazing stuff, seriously amazing.
i would have liked more angst on rory's part on how he treated kai, and i would have liked some more angst on matt/shen's part, on how lucky they were to get on the nicer side of the compound, unlike gavan and jaime.

but these are petty trifles. what i really want to say is OMK YOU ARE SO AMAZING. YOU ARE /MADE/ OF AWESOME AND I THINK YOU SHOULD KEEP WRITING.

=)

This took me days to get through, and I loved it. Thanks for sharing. :)

Great story! I think you should try publishing it after you get an editor to brush up the rare rough spots. Keep writing!

It's finished. I feel strangely empty. No more Gavan and Jaime? No more Rory and Kai? No more Matt or Shen or, or Ro-Sim? I grieve. I really, really love this. It has just the right amount of happy, while not making it too sappy. That rhymed, hah. Anyway, off I go to read another one of your stories. Will they be as awesome as this one? Probably, cause you rock! Thank you so much for writing this awesome story, and giving everyone who reads this so much enjoyment.

I truly adore this story. I'm not sure who my favourites are. It's a toss-up between Gavin and Jaime and Rory and Kai. I'm so, so surprised this hasn't gotten more reviews! I completely love this story, and I'm only on chapter 12. I am so recommending this story to anyone who'll listen. Thank you for writing this.

I really liked this story.

Just wanted to let you know. :)