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forbiddenstars
2008-10-06
ch 33,
AGAIN, no login. but incase you want to reply, my email is esther1993 at yahoo dot com. i didn't want to put it in actual form cause i think fp will eat it.

but. seriously. i would have reviewd every single one of these chapters, except for the fact that i was trying to marathon-read and just get it all finished, not to mention the fact that i'm suppoesd to be doing history homework. >.>

you write some amazing stuff, seriously amazing.
i would have liked more angst on rory's part on how he treated kai, and i would have liked some more angst on matt/shen's part, on how lucky they were to get on the nicer side of the compound, unlike gavan and jaime.

but these are petty trifles. what i really want to say is OMK YOU ARE SO AMAZING. YOU ARE /MADE/ OF AWESOME AND I THINK YOU SHOULD KEEP WRITING.

=)
knits alot
2008-09-20
ch 33,
This took me days to get through, and I loved it. Thanks for sharing. :)
Isis
2008-07-27
ch 33,
Great story! I think you should try publishing it after you get an editor to brush up the rare rough spots. Keep writing!
Chloris
2008-06-25
ch 33,
It's finished. I feel strangely empty. No more Gavan and Jaime? No more Rory and Kai? No more Matt or Shen or, or Ro-Sim? I grieve. I really, really love this. It has just the right amount of happy, while not making it too sappy. That rhymed, hah. Anyway, off I go to read another one of your stories. Will they be as awesome as this one? Probably, cause you rock! Thank you so much for writing this awesome story, and giving everyone who reads this so much enjoyment.
Chloris
2008-06-25
ch 12,
I truly adore this story. I'm not sure who my favourites are. It's a toss-up between Gavin and Jaime and Rory and Kai. I'm so, so surprised this hasn't gotten more reviews! I completely love this story, and I'm only on chapter 12. I am so recommending this story to anyone who'll listen. Thank you for writing this.
Rocks Beneath the Water
2008-04-06
ch 33,
I really liked this story.

Just wanted to let you know. :)
Aoi Mitsuko
2008-03-19
ch 33,
I know this is a little late, but I only just found this story a few days ago, and I am so AMAZED. Honestly, this was one of THE best things I have ever read on here (and I've been using this website for a long time,).

The way you write is just so, amazing XD Your structure is so solid, it's everything just flows, it moves so well, like it's supposed to, and the characters are so REAL. I enjoyed reading this so, so much. I've been obsessing over it for days, trying to read as much as I could when I wasn't busy.

So, this was amazing (it's really the only word I can use) and I feel like crying now that's it's finished, you did a wonderful job at creating something so unique, and I so enjoyed reading this.

I'll definitely be checking out some of your other works! XD
Teh Outtawacked
2008-02-28
ch 1,
this...story is the one of the best stories i've ever read...no i'm not being a mindless yip girl- i really loved it! you are one of teh best authors i've found on this site- (no really, i mean it!) if i only could say one thing i love about the way you right, it's the fact that your character's personalities are so well developed! they're all unique in there own quirky ways.
lol

about Ro-sim and vulcan lol. poor man...

and the plot! wow...Dehv virus?! bio warfare?! it seemed so brilliant and well thought out! kudos!

and i love the way you write...fun but it has a point and the reality of the situations (i have read your other stories too...i've just sat on my lazy arse too long to review them)

*claps* you can count on me to be there when the next story starts!
Amindaya
2008-01-09
ch 33,
Actually, I think I like this one better than the other three. :D It's been AMAZING reading this.
Amindaya
2008-01-09
ch 32,
Haha. I'm snickering. Poor guys. But I'm glad they're okay.
Amindaya
2008-01-09
ch 31,
Uh oh. I didn't even think of that.

Well, I did, but it was way back, like 10 or so chapters. I thought they were safe!
Amindaya
2008-01-09
ch 30,
Thank you so so much!
Amindaya
2008-01-09
ch 29,
OH MY GOD! YES!
Amindaya
2008-01-09
ch 28,
Dare I hope the other two men were Jaime and Gavan?
Amindaya
2008-01-09
ch 27,
YES! Woo! Shen and Matt are going to be okay!
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