Oh gosh, how does Dustin get himself into these situations? Update soon!

omg that was sick.poor dustin. bella, anna, bella, anna. he is so confused.

can't wait till the next one i wonder how he's gonna get back to his girl.

This is just ** amazing. Beautiful, beautiful job. I love your writing style.It's hard to tell whoose speaking sometimes but i eventually get it. Can't wait till the next one.

Wow, amazing

This story has a really interesting style, and is rather well written. The plot is also intriguing and fun. It's very primal and a lot like art but in words. Great going, I'd love to read more of this.

WHOO! GO DUSTIN! Get outta there!

Oh sweet Gerard. That was awesome

-- You like guns?

It had been quiet for a long time before she asked the question and it somehow didn’t surprise him.

-- Yeah.

-- There’s a couple back there, you know. Handguns. Rifles.

-- What for?

She looked over her shoulder at him and smiled. His breath came in ragged. She turned back to the road.

-- What do you think they’re for?

-- Oh sweet Jesus I love you.

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That is the greatest scene, I just love that, Just like I loves you

I'm kind of confused.. try to put in the setting as soon as possible.. I felt like your characters were kinda floating there xD