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| BehrBeMine 2007-03-31 ch 1,   | The atmospheric pain is as strongly behind their meaning as it is of it. A haunting image; one worthy of applause. |
| The Un-great-ful 2007-03-31 ch 1, | Chewing needles seems like a bit of a bad idea, I like the depressing imagery though. Keep writing, Alan. |