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| My Deepest Regret 2007-04-05 ch 1,  | abuseI know exactly wat u feel... my grandmother died recently so i feel your pain |
| Mabisco 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abusethis is intense, and i do like it but i was thinking at the beginning of it, you wrote: Pain… Sorrow… All this I feel ... i just felt like maybe if you put a third emotion it would have been better, because it's two, and...three would have just flowed better with your next line. |