|Reviews for Slouching Towards Bethlehem|
| Red Masque 4/1/07 . chapter 5
She deserved the shot. Everyone does, right? Or maybe I haven't distanced myself enough from any sort of doctrine to think otherwise. There are always other sides to stories, always other reasons for actions than what are uttered...
This was a tour-de-force as short fiction goes, ami. As usual, I'm absolutely green over your utterly precise dialogue and intensely clever turns of phrase that elicit the perfect emotional responses... A diamond. For what seems like the first time in forever, I'm sending a fictionpress story to all of my friends.
| Red Masque 4/1/07 . chapter 2
You've made me cry. Just thought you should know before I continue. I have a feeling my waterworks are not over, are they?
It's funny... the littlest thing set me off, too. "'Sup, babe,' he mumbles sleepily." That told me the whole rest of the chapter without you having to write it. But when you did... it was flawlessly there. I was there...