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Alicia Davis 2008-04-25 ch 13,	abusehey! write more! if you don't im going to hit you in the head with a frisbee...if i don't throw it like across the universe into the goal...write more!!
avoidingreality 2008-03-26 ch 13,	abusei agree with katie
glaremaster 2008-03-24 ch 13,	abuseHAHAHA it seems i shall have to force all of you to update! sigh what has life come to! anyways love your story and you should snog this chris guy pretty son and a next chapter in like a week or two would be nice compared to the months you make us poor readers wait! ...PUNK!! love ya!
marebear 2008-02-20 ch 12, anon.	abusestill pretty good, tho the whole mom knowing about ghost thing is a little bit spoiling...sorry, but I must critize, and um, you might be going a bit too fast. But it is still pretty amazingly fantastic...think of posting somethings of my own on here, maybe even get Ford to forward those logs to me and stick those up...tootalloo!
marebear 2008-02-20 ch 5, anon.	abuseoh...my...god...you're hogging all your great talent to yourself! This is amazing. Mind you, the chapters are a bit short, but I'll deal. um, I like the name Dean for Jake. Or Mike. Dean and Jade. Mike and Jade. Alex and Jade. I could keep going but...Kevin and Jade. Work off it!
I Quoth Nevermore 2008-01-26 ch 12,	abuseGreat update. Was that Chris' voice who commented about the party on wallstreet or was that Emma imagining him saying that? Anyways, update soon!
isabellacello 2007-12-01 ch 6,	abuseHey, You need to post ore. Wy are you not posting? I must read more! Post more now! Thanks. Keep writing cause you're great at it! ~A friend.
isabellacello 2007-11-02 ch 11,	abuseHey, Your story is so great! I know it’s a real winner because I get the same rush of adrenaline when I read it as I do when I read the Twilight series. I did notice that Emma is a klutz just like Isabella Swan and she has a vampire looking after her. Plus, the car scene is similar to the one in Twilight. Oh well though. I base some of my stores off other books I have read as well so whatever. Well that was slightly unexpected. I never imagined that he would be a ghost. By the way, I love the way you used Eclipse in your story that is cool. I hope you are not a stalker, but I am glad that you love me in a non-creepy (and non-stalker) friend way. I agree with the whole exasperation about the French project I mean seriously! Keep writing cause you’re great at it! ~A friend
isabellacello 2007-11-01 ch 1,	abuseHey Stephanie, This story is great! I picked up on a few errors though so when/if you look through it again, read carefully and make sure you spell words correctly and have them finished. By the way, is Jake supposed to be like Jacob? So, I have only read the first part (The Beginning as you put it) and I already loe it. I can tell that whomever the guy is that Em can't stop obsessing over is a vampire. Keep writing because you are great at it! ~A friend
RebelianAngel 2007-10-30 ch 11,	abuseI love Chris! So sad about his past. You mentioned that you wrote the ending and now you made me curious. I may drive myself insane, I hope your happy. Hehe. Just kidding. ;) I love it so far. Chris is so HOT! Okay, girly moment over. I can't wait until the next update. I wonder...
I Quoth Nevermore 2007-10-30 ch 11,	abuseI love this. Poor Chris. He's a sensitive fellow, isn't he? Well, who wouldn't be sensitive about their own death. Hehe...I wonder where this will go. update soon!
I Quoth Nevermore 2007-08-29 ch 10,	abuseGreat work. I like how you write Chris' character. Haha. Four golded rules. Brilliant. Update soon! P.S. GOOD LUCK WITH SCHOOL! I was that silent kid gone unnoticed back in freshman year. LoL.
SolisLuna 2007-08-28 ch 9,	abuseHmm. Rather short chapters but w/e. Update soon por favor.
madeyes61 2007-08-28 ch 10,	abuseHey! First off I hope you had a god first day of school. And I love this story so far. Update soon
glaremaster 2007-08-28 ch 10,	abuseHOMESKILLET! This Ryan fellow is going to get so pwnd if he doesn't step up to the plate. To be honest this Chris guy annoys me, it's just something about him. I think he should be hotter... and a demon, but of course I think all guys should be really hot demons. I guess this means I have to write a demon story now. Sigh! Much love for your story!REPRESENT! PS: My hot demon could so kick your angel's **.

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