Reviews for Second Hand Smoke

Reviews For: Second Hand Smoke

bittersweet.season 2007-06-26 ch 1,	the last four lines. ooh, i love them. so spiteful and pretty and raw.
Her Wishing Well 2007-05-18 ch 1,	Wow, great. I love the last line -real powerful stuff here.
C. Earnshaw 2007-05-08 ch 1,	I really like the power in this poem. The imagery of the smoke actually made my eyes water. Well done :)
poet tree 2007-04-25 ch 1,	I like this. A lot. My only issue is that the line where you use "crap" kind of detracts from the overall effect. But that could just be me, since I don't like that word anyway. XD Good job, good imagery.
recycle rhymes 2007-04-25 ch 1,	wow bitter. reminds me of the first chapter of my series: affliction. i guess i feel that ppl who smoke are selfish b/c of the secondhand smoke. nice work :)
Comawhite13 2007-04-14 ch 1,	This poem is grotesque. I like it :D
whispered something profoun... 2007-04-10 ch 1,	your stuff's pretty good! The end was funny. Laughing out loud literally.
Kusje 2007-04-05 ch 1,	I normally don't say this but OH MY GOD. I love this line: before blowing her fucking second hand smoke back into his tear-stained face That is such an amazing line of poetry. Brilliant!
Room Without A Door 2007-04-04 ch 1,	Such a unique style - love it! The overall mood and idea of the piece says so much. Though I think my favourite line has to be "and everybody always told me that soul maters don't exist". It sums up the poem so well. Nicely done.
Taltush/MeiMei 2007-04-01 ch 1,	Sometimes you scare me... But that's okay. It reminds me that the world isn't just what I see. It's dark (and gross), but your writing is so good, so I'll be right back, terrified, the next time you come around. =)
RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2007-03-31 ch 1,	I loved that...especially the last line! Nice new name XD I kinda want a new one but I don't know what...
Monotonous Meshugana 2007-03-31 ch 1,	Wow, I really loved this poem a lot. I love everything about it and how you used words. I really liked the middle a lot. It's a short poem, and very perfect. Keep up the awesome writing!
nectar in a sieve 2007-03-31 ch 1,	it's.. brilliant. the whole thing. love the secondhand smoke line :] and the way you've twisted soul mates to a modern day definion, it's a true love for the books. (i try to feel bad for the boy here, and be angry with the girl. but it relates a little too well to life, and i'm left wondering what it is he's done, because i'm sure he probably deserves it) you're gifted.
Even Gods Dream 2007-03-31 ch 1,	I absolutely love it. So blackly beautiful. Although beautiful isnt the word, but I cant think of what I mean, so beautiful will have to do.
a silenced revolution 2007-03-31 ch 1,	Wow, biting. Good portrayal of the situation. Great job!

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