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| Altum 2007-11-17 ch 1,   | Interesting imagery. I'm guessing this is about the moon? I might be way off. |
| Kioasakka 2007-05-13 ch 1, | This was good. What I would suggest, though, is that when you write a haiku, mayhap you should put more than just one in. :3 |
| Patrick McGill 2007-04-17 ch 1, | I have no aptitude for poetry. I attempt to dabble in haiku, because my fiance` has a lot of poetic ability and so it motivates me to try. I like this, because despite its small length, it conveys (to me) a complete atmosphere. Like, perhaps, Victorian London at night, with carriage wheels clodding on cobblestones and all that. |
| Psychogizmo 2007-04-13 ch 1, | Well, the haiku definitely creates an image, and that's what you're going for, isn't it? *Thumbs up* |
| Basara 2007-04-03 ch 1, | wow... nice... |
| helle xandria encaitarince 2007-04-02 ch 1, | i like the images you used... it almost sounds like a star in the sky, and at the same time, a pocket watch lying upon a black suit jacket... gorgeous :) |
| GryphonFledglingOfSilverWin... 2007-04-01 ch 1, | I really like it. I'm still new on the Haiku scene, but this was awesome. *inspired* Sorry I don't have much else to say. I'm not exactly a poetry expert. Lovely, lovely... ~GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings |
| My Brighter Darkness 2007-03-31 ch 1, | A little short, but kinda sweet. However, with it being so short, what I would do, is write a few more about the same subject that are about that long, and post together. But I like it. MBD |