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| Basara 2007-04-03 ch 1,   | wow... nice... |
| Midnight In Eden 2007-04-02 ch 1, | This has fantastic imagery but I'm wondering if a touch of punctuation might help guide the emphasis of this piece? Otherwise, lovely. .:midnight:. |