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| Innocent Assassin 2007-06-07 ch 1,   | wow... like all your other stories i luv it! |
| justaguy 2007-04-12 ch 1, | I really love your writing, only...you leave us hanging. I want more than Chapter one. LOL You get me interested and then it ends. You are good. Well, I think so. Please, continue. |
| In This Shindig 2007-03-31 ch 1, | "I love her, Mat." Totally wasn't expecting that. I don't know... I didn't like the fact that Mat turned from an arrogant, attention-snogger to an encouraging "acquaintance". Was is just a spur of the moment? Swallowing his pride? /Losing/ his pride because tears tend to sway him? ... Sorry. I like reasons behind actions. My teachers like the fact that I'm specific, but it can be my enemy sometimes when I don't know when to stop. ;D It was a fun read, though. Hey, I'm a fellow thirteen-year-old writer as well. But I don't recommend you read my stories. They make me gag at pure thought. |
| lygophobic lullabies 2007-03-31 ch 1, | Hmm, very interesting, indeed... |