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Reviews For: It Comes to This

smile for the sunshine
2007-05-26
ch 1,
abuseI really like this. It's really well written. I like the description. I like all of the figuartive language that you incorporated into it. I would have like the description to be a tad bit long but all in all, I loved it. Good work. Keep writing =]
hateandkill-D
2007-04-07
ch 1,
abuseerm, nice job on this, very sad though, angryish... i really like it!!
daretobe-dIfFeRnT
2007-04-04
ch 1,
abusedifferent. i like it:D
Swords
2007-04-02
ch 1,
abuse...this seems more poem-ish than story-ish.
I like it...it's kind of cold...yet not.
I have it Watson, ITS A REALIZATION!

DONT DIE! IF YOU DIE THEN MY BEST FRIEND IS A ZOMBIE!

x.Insanely Serene.x
2007-04-01
ch 1,
abuseplease post more... cuz i dunno if it's a bad thing... but i feel the same way! please, write more!

love ya lots,
ren
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