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Reviews For: Shattered Dreams
zestychicken2 2008-08-23 . chapter 1
Hey!! Well, zestychicken2 yet again (from fanfiction that is) Read this story... LOVED IT! Reading the sequal (which you need to update) LOVING IT!

This one is, as far as I remember, pretty different, but still almost equally good. The only thing is that you left some sort of a mystery with Riku and Ryou... But, that's not really important I suppose... And, the fact that you had Kairi talking about what was up with her life at the beginning... But I'm not complaining, this one still sounds just as good. Just gotta update!

I'll be happy for one whenever, and looking forward to it. You definately ahve a lot of skill writing, and this idea is so amazing I'm willing to read it all over again!

Yay!

Update soon! (I know, you haven't updated in uberly forever... but meh)

-zesty-
lygophobic lullabies 2007-03-31 . chapter 1
Very nice, hm, a bit of fluff though, just try to make it a bit more interesting.
Zanisha 2007-03-31 . chapter 1
SQUEE. ♥

The parts about tech theatre and all that pwnful Brooke-ness makes me giggle. :3 Andandand, you know, that means this kicks a LOT of butt. Right now, I can't concentrate anything that isn't Death Note, but rofl, here I am. Even though I'm still thinking of them as Kairi and Sora... and then I start imagining them as Raito and Misa... and... haha.

ILU. :]
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