Reviews for Not so Happily Ever After

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Excessum 2008-07-23 ch 14,	abuseSo far so good. She finally took the thing off.
Heffy 2008-07-09 ch 28,	abusepossibly the best story i have ever read. it went at just the right pace, with the transition from the surly black knight to Zorana. 11/10, i say! i've read all of your work now, and you'll be pleased to know that i stayed up till 3 in the morning reading this, i was so enthralled. Heffy wants to see this published! ~Heffy~
ekilow lettyion 2008-07-08 ch 28,	abuseThat was a very awesome story!! I'm really glad I found it! I love your characters and how you made them grow! It was very entertaining. Hahaha. Great stuff, really. :) I totally enjoyed reading it. :D Good luck with your future works!
kool-aidrocks2008 2008-06-12 ch 28,	abusehi, i know i'm really late at finding this story but i loved it!
Isobel Q. Rowan 2008-05-23 ch 28,	abuseAwesome story. Loved it. I also enjoyed the chapter titles. Very, very clever. You should really try to get your stuff published, Brianna. There's a couple of outstanding alternative presses with their guidelines online. Check them out: Bella Books and Bold Strokes Books. Take care, Isobel
0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-05-20 ch 28,	abuseabsolutely... 0HILA0RIO0US :D big cheers for the idea mate! kutgw ciao youre awesome sam perhaps one day me shal beet thou! i dont even know if that made sense. never really concentrated in latin. lawl happy huntin'!
lauraism 2008-05-06 ch 28,	abusethis is the best story I've read in a VERY long time. I couldn't stop reading! Even at 12 at night last night I kept reading! Even now I'm reviewing from school right now. I thought your characters, especially zorana, were very well developed. The romance part of the story was also done very tastefully. One of the best stories I've read on this website! -favourites- :D
Dak 2008-05-02 ch 28,	abuseI loved it. The fact that I'm actually submitting a review is proof of that. A wonderfully sarcastic take on an overused story line. All of the characters[whether they were your own or not] were wonderful, especially the talking tree :]. Few grammatical errors, but nobody is perfect. I sat down at my computer this afternoon and haven't been able to get up until I finished it. Bravo, really.
Harley Quinn Davidson 2008-04-08 ch 28,	abuseso I read seasons of the heaet first, you guys are doing a great job on that. Then I read this story, and yes Shakespeare does rock. I liked this story alot, it had the right amount of everything, and i was funny. I hope to read more of your stuff.
someone 2008-02-24 ch 12, anon.	abusewierd that ghost walker bandit thing is very familer thank i read it somewhere eles before.
Omok 2008-02-15 ch 28,	abusesmile lol, funny indeed, but the last chapter wasn't what i had in mind. Though it served its purpose; to be funny. (even if what i had in mind was more of "after marriage between the two lovely girls, and having children" xD but you implied that, so i guess its a great ending non-the-less) though a few things don't fit in to my image of this story, first, Jasmine is 20. In the story of "Seasons of Hearts" She was 2x when she met Eadel, and how did Eadel get locked up for five years? that would make her 15 when she was locked up...around the time of the "fire?" and the chaos she was in with her father; the king of another country... and since Jasmine though Eadel was dead...shouldn't she been more sad during the story without Eadel being there? o_o; shrugs but hey! they're two "almost" completely different stories... I guess I'm just thinking too much. xD Great story! =) this story of yours, made my day! because if it wasn't for your story, i'd probably be sleeping for like the 18th hour today ._. =) I hope you write more! =) because I'm bound to read ALL of them! laughs evily
Crowmanhunter 2008-01-21 ch 28,	abuseSimply beautiful. ^^b What else is there to say?
Billy Rose 2007-12-29 ch 28,	abuseawesome fic ^_^
MBaxter 2007-09-19 ch 28,	abuseIt took me a few days, but I finally finished reading this, and decided it was definately good and deserved a review. Hence why I'm typing this. But anyway, I absolutely loved this story! It was a refreshing twist on the normal fairytale world and there was enough drama mixed with the comedy to make it a very worthwhile read. Keep up the good work! Baxter
Teh Dante 2007-09-04 ch 28,	abuseclaps slowly Bravo...Bra-freakin'-vo...haha, I said bra... I found this yesterday and was immediately addicted. The only thing that kept me from finishing in a single day was that...well, I found this very late into my night, and I had work in the morning XD But honestly, truely, seriously...I loved it. I've been meaning to do a story where I work with the old cliche of princesses being rescued by dragons, so this was quite a find. I can indentify with Zorana BIG TIME laughs softly And I'm just gonna take a blind stab into the dark and guess that the talkin' tree would have said that the woman one saw in the enchanted lake was one's love, eh? Heheh... Hey, thanks for writing such a great story. And actually completing it! I wish I could do that ._. lol

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