|Reviews for Not so Happily Ever After|
| twilights aura 7/11/07 . chapter 7
| Anxiety 7/11/07 . chapter 7
You know, it's strange, just the other day I was wondering when Zorana's identity was going to be revealed to the others (I thought, for a second, that it was going to be during the whole demon cat incident), and here it is, the revelation... at least to one of the three characters... though for some reason I want to say Golem knows... don't know why, though. Well, anyway, I should wrap this up before I begin to ramble.
It was an interesting chapter, though I found the humor in this one was lacking (well... I understand that you can't expect every chapter to have humor and that this one it would've been best to leave the humor out of it). And I don't really see why you use "they" when referring to the one person... though you can't really use a normal pronoun when the gender is questionable, so I can understand using "they" as opposed to "this person" the whole time.
| guu-sama 7/11/07 . chapter 7
whee, another update! Great chapter as always. Keep going!
| guu-sama 7/9/07 . chapter 6
Really excellent writing! This is such a great chapter. Please, keep your good work.
| Anxiety 7/9/07 . chapter 6
"Demon cat! Get it off me!" Haha! Classic!
Is it bad that I found it humorous when I realized that Sweet November Sunshine (or whatever the name was) was the burning cat? I really have nothing against cats... it is they who have something against me...
Anywho... interesting chapter.
| ghostlygeorge 7/5/07 . chapter 5
YAY! i'm glad youre back! Alaska is like whoa...how in the world do you deal with all that light? well anyway I love your story and was waiting 'til there was update to tell...to see if you were still alive that is!
| And-on-Anonymous 6/20/07 . chapter 5
I like this story, it was a bit of a wait- but I think moving to Alaska is a fiar excuse ! I'm from England, so that semss like another world away- what's it like? I hope you can update sooner, now you have internet again- this is a good story :)
I like the way this is written, it's funya nd it flows and it has a storyline. it's a nice twist on a classic tale- i like the fact it is with 2 girls. LOVE the fact that faranea still hasn't guessed- thought you did the bit about her apologisiing very sensitively and well.
Once againn- good job and I look forward to the next installment. Also- I'm so intrigued to see what our lady-knight looks like!
| Sy Itha 6/20/07 . chapter 5
update soon...I want to see her helmet come off and Harken freak out
| Anxiety 6/20/07 . chapter 5
Well, that was an interesting chapter, can't wait for more. Not sure what else to say, honestly...
| guu-sama 5/4/07 . chapter 4
hi i read your story and i absolutely loved it. I can't wait to read your next chapter to find out what happens next._
| And-on-Anonymous 4/25/07 . chapter 4
i love it! It's excellent! WHat a fabulous and original idea- I'm very impressed. I like the way this is going :)
The only thing I would leave out is the 'the author' jokes- they are funnym, but it did interrupt the flow of the chapter (it wasn't in this one). I'm only saying this cos some authors like to pout them in all the time and it gets wearing, but you've only put 1 in, i may be being a but hasty. Anyway, I'm very much looking forward to the update, Loved the tree bit- v.v. funnya and i like the way you have mixed humour in with the story generally (oh yeah- gradmother absolutely HILARIOUS!) Good Job!
| Anxiety 4/23/07 . chapter 4
Hmm... interesting chapter, but whoever heard of a dragon with a Scottish accent? Oh, yeah, the creators of Dragon Heart... yet again. (I meant Dragon Heart in my previous review, don't know why I said Brave Heart). Well, this should turn out to be quite the interesting story once it is finished.
| Sy Itha 4/16/07 . chapter 4
*giggles* update soon
| MadMaverick 4/16/07 . chapter 4
You know, I think the Black Knight would make an excellent rugger if she likes a good fight now and then. Harkan seems to be developing backbone, it's still funny (provided the namecalling between Faranea and the Black Knight doesn't hijack the dialogue), and I really like Golem, because he has style. Nicely done thus far; keep it up.
| MadMaverick 4/16/07 . chapter 1
As promised, this is humorous, especially the king. I've also never run into the Black Knight as a woman before.