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| E.Maginitive 2007-07-09 ch 7,   | Honestly, it's really good but I think Maya needs a new guy. And in my opinion it needs more drama...but that's just me! Please update soon! |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-07-09 ch 7, | Aw, what happened to Maddie? I REALY LIKE THIS STORY! Ryder is soo sweet! UPDATE! |
| pinkfairydust 2007-07-09 ch 7, | OKAY i zoomed through this!! whats up with maddie!! IM UNDER STRESS HERE!! update!! |
| nadinerdrgz 2007-05-14 ch 6, | wow good story |
| BrokenHeartedAngel 2007-04-21 ch 5, | omg i luv this story! you. ate. my. cookies. I LUV IT! that was so funny! i actully kinda forgot about this story..that *bam* email comes saying YAY NEW CHApTER and im like..wait i liked this story but i cant remember what it was about! but now i do! yay! good job! cookies! |
| remae 2007-04-21 ch 1, | This story is great so far! I love the humor in it and all the characters are so funny, especially Maya. I also love Tyson, hahaha. keep up the great work (: |
| Mandi!!!! 2007-04-17 ch 1, | KAMALEI is crazy, its a perfectly balanced amount of humor, reality(w/ some fantasylol), and traps you into the story. |
| BrokenHeartedAngel 2007-04-07 ch 4, | Yes, that tis spanish! xD i even looked it up! xD is what i went to. or the first thing on google when translater was typed in! xD I LUV THIS! LUV LUV LUV! I HATE MAVERICK! i luv his name tho...=) I LUV THIS STORY! |
| BrokenHeartedAngel 2007-04-07 ch 3, | ok i finally finished this chapter! i luv it! yay! PS i just looked at ur name...pie master...I LUV IT! XD |
| BrokenHeartedAngel 2007-03-31 ch 1, | IM IN LUV! I LUV THIS! I WANT MOREMROEMORE! |