Reviews for Sorrowful Song of Caged Birds

Reviews For: Sorrowful Song of Caged Birds

nomy 2008-01-11 ch 1,	you've done an amazing story..it remind me of the movie "i am legend'..or maybe if you read the book you may be inspired from that..but oh my god!..its like so heartbreaking your story towards the end..its full with emotion and i actually feel sad and wanted to cry towards the end..but actually you didn't explain on what causes the virus..its just like a blood virus or some sort i assume...but its sad when Shoji contracted when he hold Takashi as in the end Takashi did indeed infect him..its and amazing story and i truly like it..just you make it totally tragedy and it kinda put me down a bit..but in a good way i suppose as that means that your story did do what it tended to do...
Snarky Fox 2007-12-23 ch 1,	Oh wow... I cried... Thats one of the saddest things I've ever read. Just one horrible thing after another! My god, it was just heart wrenching. The ending was even a little sad. I wish you'd just write a scene with Takashi and Shoji in heaven or the after life or whatever! That was well written and I hope that more people leave reviews for this awesome work of literature. It just blew me away to tell you the truth. Just the depth of it all. Wow. I loved it if you couldn't tell already and I'm going to check out some more of your stories. S. Fox
Fido La Canadienne 2007-12-07 ch 1,	Oh, wow. This had to be one of the saddest (one-shot) stories I have ever read. I am seriously trying hard not to cry right now - it was beautifully written, I saw clearly in my mind what was happening, the desolate and helpless atmosphere of the City... a definite favourite piece. Dare I inquire how this story began (what brought on the idea)?
Shojogurl 2007-07-08 ch 1,	THAT was beyond sad...I'm trying really hard not to cry right now and it's not working that well. Excellent story. Sad, but still very good. You've earned a favorite! :) thanx! -Shojogurl
gerigirl 2007-06-23 ch 1,	i love this story even if it was really sad towards the end.
Taka-Chan-A Talking Takoyak... 2007-05-12 ch 1,	It was so good! But really sad too...
Last Place 2007-04-02 ch 1,	So sad! But so fantastically written, I was really impressed.
FoxyGrampa 2007-04-02 ch 1,	That was freakin' awesome. Very emotional; very sad. But the ending was wonderfully hopeful and optimistic. I almost want to see Elias' journey; maybe you could write a sequel? ;] Anyway... do you mind if I add this to my C2 archive? I think it's definitely a good enough story for it. You made their love so beautiful that it didn't even need to display the physical aspects of it, which is hard to do for some boy love authors, including myself. x]'' But yeah, answer me on that. :DD
idi-beans 2007-04-01 ch 1,	Touching, sad, and yet happy. I don't know; I'm confused right now, okay? You know, you made me cry, waah. I like the emotions portrayed here, because it really gets to me. Somehow, you pointed out to the readers (er, me) that not all endings have to be "happy", but you know... Still, I find it happy. I love the way that it just drifts off like that, because seriously, it makes the ending unique. I like that little bit about the promise; it adds to that depth that somehow, there's the littlest bit of hope in a hellhole that somewhere is, the b!+ch that life can be sometimes. The way the death was done. Well. Hmn, about that. It was awesome, really. Somehow, I really like to extend this review to something more constructive, but my brain won't function. Usually, I give really long reviews, but whaddaheck. So, kudos to you for making me cry (because really little people get to do that), and for making a really nice story. Things like these are rare. So yeah. [Goes off to read your other stories] ~beans

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