Reviews for Different and Cool FT: Tale 1

Reviews For: Different and Cool FT: Tale 1

ainebear 2008-11-03 ch 2,	Very up-scale writing, with descriptive words. A few I had to look up (embarrassingly) Though it was very well written, but my guess is that it only appeals to experienced readers. So it's not all around friendly to every reader. Not a bad thing, just my judgement. The pace seems to jumps in quickly. Not necessarily a bad thing,again, but it went from normal paced day, to a lot of, er, strangness? Good for someone who wants to get right into the action. I enjoyed reading it, a bit on the difficult side. Maybe that is just me. Though it kept me wanting to read more and more. Had a nice feeling when I read, even at the suspenseful parts. Great spacing on paragraphs, and everything in your technique flowed nicely. No loose ends about anything.
SyMph0Ny Of cOloRS 2008-11-02 ch 1,	Ok well you were pretty descriptive so that's a plus. I did notice a few spelling errors though so you should use spell check. It didn't really entertain me though and I usually don't like dragon stories. I think your characters seemed believe-able though. I felt as if they could be people I know in real life.
Xephia 2008-05-03 ch 1,	Just a few errors, mostly spelling, but apart from that it was really enjoyable! I loved the fight scene, and your use of descriptive language is amazing. I could really picture Dreamscape in my head, eerie but at the same time, magical. Your a really amazing writer.
criti-sized 2007-06-04 ch 1,	Well, as I had stated before, I'm not really much of an anime-type reader, but I found the descriptions in this short to be very nice. Though I'm not sure if you used the same protagonist Park that was presented in the short that I reviewed you for previously, but it doesn't matter. The short, though in need of some revision throughout it is worth the read. And the dialogue seems a bit estranged from the short in certain areas, as well as sometimes too much detailing is given, instead of a simple explanation that'll suit. Your battle scenario was pretty nice and cut to a point where it was neither too enduring nor too direct, which is good. As for the second short, I don't really see where they all come together, but found it a good read as well, there wasn't anything noteworthy of grammar-wise.
Wicca Girl 2007-05-15 ch 1,	Nice chapter. UPDATE ASAP!
The Ferrett 2007-04-09 ch 1,	I was just about to message you asking you to hurry up when you did THIS! So our hero and heroine (m drugs - joking) are in fantasy land. May I say that you are also fairly decent at the fantasy thing. (BTW this is a response review to what you did during my reviewer's found week. You are going to have to be content with one as you are really running out of chapters) But I digress, The fight scene I'd say is a six with the core of movement and raw power being slightly dulled by the fact that the flow takes away the power and makes it more cartoony than real. Mind you, as fight scenes go it works. The Tarah and Andy stuff I see happens between books (or in an alternate world after the first book) and it now seems that Tarah is the one being remarkably strange - good work ol' chap. Would like to see more of everything. ::))

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