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| Black Alya Wolf 2007-04-01 ch 1,   | Gee, sarcastic much? *chuckle* Not that I blame you, of course. I keep getting onto my friends at school for acting like stereotypical, "Life sucks, we're all doomed in the end," people that don't how to make the best out of a particularly bad situation. The only thing I found wrong with your writing is that you probably didn't look over it after you were finished; or if you did, not very well. In other words, there were several typos and a few minor grammatical errors (no semicolons where they're needed, the fractured sentence with '?!?!' at the end; things like that) that seemed to get lost in your passionate flow of pencil to paper. (That last was metaphorical, mind you; I don't know if you just typed it or used pen or something.) My only suggestion for you is to look it over your work carefully before handing it in. P.S. I LOVE the quote you've got at the bottom, in your author's note! In my opinion, those six words define the meaning of life. :) Cheers, and keep up the good work! |
| EoSpHoRuS 2007-04-01 ch 1, | Wow...I can form no words. Man, I wish I had your brain when I have to write essays. It would be so much easier on me. But dang...You better get the highest grade possible for that! It was really, really great! And I completely agree with it. I would write a lot more but I really am at a loss for words. It was that good. ~Meg |