Reviews for Three Reasons Why

Reviews For: Three Reasons Why

vfx 2007-10-14 ch 1,	abusethat was a beautiful story. it was pretty dark, but I like it. you don't need to change a thing. It's fine the way it is.
aolia 2007-08-24 ch 1,	abusebeautiful. dark, realistic, ... I love the tone of the story, if you can call it a 'tone'. Just the overall feel of the story is what I meant. I love the surprises, twists that happens. I feel like every word you used in this short story was important, like every word had a significant meaning.
LEDlorien7 2007-04-18 ch 1,	abuseI love the list of the things that use three, that was pretty cool, and it makes a great start for a story. It grabs my attention. This sentence right here: "She just lagged, for some inexplicable reason, she was late." - The way it's written, the middle part could refer to either the beginning or the end. If you want it to be a specific reference, which would be nice, put an "and" before either comma. That would make it either: "She just lagged, and for some inexplicable reason, she was late." or "She just lagged, for some inexplicable reason, and she was late." - it's subtle, but there is a difference. "I think I could get you" Get meaning understand, right? for some reason, I read it as a sexual insinuation... Wow, that's an incredible story. It's so well written and so realistic. I couldn't even comment after a little while, i just had to read it all. It's unbelievably well done, i can't even explain why. Great job!
NightyNightUK 2007-04-01 ch 1,	abusethat was purely brilliant. you need to get that published because it was damn amazing.
PoisonedSoul 2007-04-01 ch 1,	abuseCant give you a proper reason, but I think this a beautiful story. Sad, but beautiful. Well done. p/s: mind the spelling though :))

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